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Vocabulary for WAT: Essential Words, Phrases & Expression Strategies

Master vocabulary for WAT with essential word banks, transition phrases, statistics integration, and storytelling techniques. Includes common mistakes to avoid and improvement strategies.

Vocabulary for WAT: Why Word Choice Matters

“Vigorous writing is concise. A sentence should contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences.” William Strunk Jr. wrote this in 1918, and it remains the golden rule for WAT essays. In the 30 seconds an evaluator spends on your essay, your vocabulary choices signal everything—your clarity of thought, your confidence, your intellectual maturity.

But here’s what most students get wrong: sophisticated vocabulary isn’t about using big words. It’s about choosing the right words. An evaluator reading “utilize” where “use” would work knows you’re trying too hard. An evaluator reading “paradigm shift” in every paragraph knows you’ve memorized phrases without understanding them.

16%
Rejected for lack of clarity
87%
Essays contain “In my opinion”
+38%
Score boost for specific data/years

The Vocabulary Paradox: Simple Beats Complex

Research from IIM faculty interviews reveals a counterintuitive truth: simple, clear language consistently beats complex vocabulary. Why? Because clarity reflects thinking quality. As Ratan Tata noted: “If your writing is rambling or obscure, it suggests your thinking is similarly unclear.”

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Precision Over Impression
Every word must earn its place. “Utilize” doesn’t add anything that “use” doesn’t. “Transform” says more than “change.” Choose words that add meaning, not syllables.
2
Active Over Passive
Active voice demands action verbs. “The company implemented” beats “Implementation was done by the company.” Active writing is 30% shorter and 100% clearer.
3
Specific Over Generic
“Economic impact” is vague. “₹615 crore budget” is specific. Specificity demonstrates knowledge; generality demonstrates its absence.
4
Confident Over Hedged
“Perhaps maybe possibly” shows uncertainty. “Evidence suggests” shows analytical confidence. State your view, acknowledge complexity, then conclude.
Coach’s Perspective
Here’s what I tell every student obsessing over vocabulary: if you have to look up a word to use it, don’t use it. Evaluators can spot forced vocabulary instantly—it reads like someone wearing an ill-fitting suit. Your goal isn’t to impress with words they haven’t seen; it’s to express ideas they haven’t heard. A 10th-grader’s vocabulary, deployed with precision and clarity, beats a thesaurus-explosion every time. The verb test applies here too: if there’s no action verb, there’s no action. “India needs better education” (no verb) is weaker than “Schools must integrate vocational training” (has verbs). Focus on verbs, not adjectives.

WAT Vocabulary Improvement: Essential Word Banks

Vocabulary improvement for WAT isn’t about memorizing lists—it’s about building functional word banks organized by purpose. Here are the five categories every WAT writer needs.

Category 1: Power Transition Words

Transitions are the connective tissue of your essay. The right transition signals your logical structure; the wrong one (or none) makes your essay feel like a list of unconnected thoughts.

Purpose Basic Words (Avoid) Power Words (Use)
Adding Points Also, And, Plus Furthermore, Moreover, Additionally, Similarly
Contrasting But, Still However, Nevertheless, Conversely, That said
Showing Cause Because, So Consequently, Therefore, As a result, Hence
Emphasizing Really, Very Significantly, Notably, Crucially, Indeed
Concluding Finally, In the end Ultimately, To synthesize, The way forward

Category 2: Argument Vocabulary

WAT is argumentation, not article writing. Your vocabulary should reflect logical reasoning.

Instead of “I think”:

  • “This analysis suggests…”
  • “The evidence indicates…”
  • “A closer examination reveals…”
  • “It becomes apparent that…”
  • “One can reasonably conclude…”

Note: “In my opinion” appears in 87% of WAT essays—evaluators dislike it. Show your opinion through argument, not announcement.

Instead of “For example”:

  • “Consider the case of…”
  • “This is exemplified by…”
  • “A compelling illustration is…”
  • “As demonstrated by…”
  • “Evidence from [source] shows…”

Tip: Named examples (“Tata’s response to 26/11”) beat generic ones (“various companies”) every time.

Acknowledging opposing views:

  • “Critics argue that…”
  • “While some contend…”
  • “Skeptics might point to…”
  • “This perspective, however, overlooks…”
  • “A valid concern is… yet…”

Counter-arguments show intellectual maturity. Essays with counter-arguments score significantly higher.

Instead of “In conclusion”:

  • “The path forward requires…”
  • “To synthesize these perspectives…”
  • “What emerges is a nuanced picture…”
  • “Ultimately, the solution lies in…”
  • “The way forward demands…”

Strong conclusions have VERBS: “must implement,” “should mandate,” “can transform.”

Category 3: Replacement Word Bank

Replace weak, overused words with precise alternatives.

Weak Word Example Better Alternatives Example
Good “This is a good policy” Effective, beneficial, sound, prudent “This is a sound policy”
Bad “This is a bad outcome” Detrimental, adverse, counterproductive “This is a detrimental outcome”
Important “This is important” Critical, pivotal, essential, decisive “This is pivotal”
Big “A big problem” Substantial, significant, considerable “A substantial problem”
Show “Studies show” Demonstrate, reveal, indicate, establish “Studies demonstrate”
Change “Things need to change” Transform, evolve, reform, restructure “Systems must transform”
⚠️ Critical: Use Elevated Vocabulary Naturally

Forced or misused words hurt more than simple language. “The policy proved deleterious to economic efflorescence” sounds like a thesaurus accident. “The policy damaged economic growth” is clearer and more confident. Only use words you can define, spell, and deploy naturally in conversation. When in doubt, simpler is better.

How to Improve Vocabulary for WAT: Practical Strategies

Vocabulary building isn’t a two-week crash course—it’s a sustained practice. Here are research-backed strategies that actually work for WAT preparation.

The 100 Golden Sentences Method

Instead of memorizing word lists, build a personal bank of 100 sentences that demonstrate effective vocabulary in context. This works especially well for non-native English speakers.

💡 How to Build Your 100 Golden Sentences

Step 1: Collect 100 well-constructed sentences from editorials (Economic Times, Mint, The Hindu)
Step 2: Categorize by purpose: openings (20), transitions (20), evidence (20), counters (20), conclusions (20)
Step 3: Practice rewriting each sentence with your own examples
Step 4: Use at least 3 patterns in every practice essay

Example sentence pattern: “While [Position A] has merit, a closer examination reveals [Position B]—as evidenced by [specific example].”
Your adaptation: “While privatization promises efficiency, a closer examination reveals implementation challenges—as evidenced by Air India’s post-Tata transformation struggles.”

The Daily 5-Minute Drill System

4-Week Vocabulary Building Plan
5 minutes daily, measurable improvement
📅 Week 1: Transitions
The Jargon Translation Drill
  • Take one complex concept daily (e.g., “quantitative easing”)
  • Explain it in one sentence to a 10-year-old
  • Now make it sound sophisticated but still clear
  • Record both versions; compare clarity vs. complexity
📅 Week 2: Openings
The 60-Second Thesis Drill
  • Pick random headline from newspaper
  • Set 60-second timer
  • Write ONE opening sentence with clear thesis
  • Focus on strong first word and action verb
📅 Week 3: Conclusions
The Memorable Closer Drill
  • Take any WAT topic from practice bank
  • Write ONLY the last 2 sentences
  • Must include: specific action + memorable phrase
  • Test: Would you remember this tomorrow?
📅 Week 4: Analogies
The Analogy Factory Drill
  • Pick abstract concept (democracy, innovation, sustainability)
  • Create 3 analogies from different domains: sports, nature, daily life
  • Example: “Economic recession is like cricket’s batting collapse—once panic sets, wickets fall faster”
  • Use idioms/proverbs: +28% higher scores on abstract topics

Reading Strategy: Quality Over Quantity

Don’t read randomly—read strategically for vocabulary acquisition.

Weekly Reading for Vocabulary Building
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  • Read 2 Economic Times editorials (note 5 new transitions)
  • Read 1 Mint Long Story (note argument structure)
  • Listen to 1 Finshots episode (note how statistics are introduced)
  • Read 1 HBR article (note business vocabulary)
  • Watch 1 Think School video (note example framing)
  • Read 1 InsideIIM WAT experience (note what worked)
  • Practice 2 timed WAT essays using new vocabulary
  • Review and categorize new words by purpose
Coach’s Perspective
Students often ask me: “How many new words should I learn for WAT?” Wrong question. You don’t need new words—you need better deployment of words you already know. The candidate who writes “The policy paradigmatically shifted the societal zeitgeist” isn’t impressing anyone. The candidate who writes “The policy changed how Indians think about healthcare” is communicating. I’ve seen vernacular-medium students outscore English-medium peers by focusing on clarity over complexity. Simple and clear beats complex and confusing. Your vocabulary goal isn’t expansion—it’s precision.

WAT MBA: Language Expectations at Top B-Schools

WAT is a core component of MBA admissions at top Indian B-schools. But language expectations vary significantly across institutions. Understanding these differences helps you calibrate your vocabulary for your target schools.

Language Expectations by School

School Language Focus Vocabulary Style What Evaluators Want
IIM-A (AWT) Business clarity Case-study language, recommendation-style “Recommend Option B because…” Analytical, direct, consulting-style vocabulary
IIM-B Grammar STRICT, 15% weightage Policy language, formal Zero grammar errors. Formal, logical connectors. No colloquialisms.
IIM-C Grammar strict, academic rigor Intellectual, well-reasoned Strong thesis early. Academic vocabulary. Clear argumentation.
IIM-L Creative expression Metaphorical, literary Analogies, proverbs, creative interpretation. Abstract topic mastery.
IIM-K Original thinking Creative, unconventional Unexpected angles. Playful language acceptable. Fresh perspective valued.
XLRI Values-based expression Ethical reasoning vocabulary Stakeholder language. Moral reasoning. Words like “responsibility,” “obligation,” “impact.”

The MBA Communication Standard

Regardless of school, MBA programs expect a certain communication standard. Here’s the vocabulary framework that works everywhere:

1
Business Literacy
Know and correctly use terms like: stakeholder, value proposition, competitive advantage, market dynamics, economies of scale, disruption, pivot, unit economics.

Don’t use these as buzzwords—use them when they add precision.
2
Policy Vocabulary
For governance topics: regulatory framework, fiscal policy, implementation challenges, institutional capacity, public-private partnership, accountability mechanisms.

IIM-B and IIM-C especially value policy-fluent language.
3
Analytical Language
Show structured thinking: from a macro/micro perspective, the trade-off between X and Y, short-term vs long-term implications, root cause analysis, cost-benefit consideration.

This signals you think like a manager.
4
Action Vocabulary
Conclusions need verbs: implement, mandate, reform, restructure, incentivize, regulate, enable, transform, allocate, prioritize.

The Verb Test: If there’s no verb, there’s no action. No action = vague nonsense.

What Language & Communication Carries in WAT Evaluation

20-25%
Language weightage in WAT scoring
96%
Top scores had 3+ paragraphs
94%
9+ essays had clear intro-body-conclusion
💡 Evaluator Quote

“A high-scoring essay is structured, logical, well-supported with examples, and easy to read—showing both knowledge and analytical thinking.” — IIM Faculty, InsideIIM AMA, 2025

WAT GD PI Process: Vocabulary Consistency Across Stages

MBA admissions at most top B-schools follow a WAT → GD (or Group Exercise) → PI sequence. Your vocabulary and communication style must remain consistent across all three stages. Schools cross-reference your performance—inconsistency raises red flags.

The WAT-PI Connection: Why Consistency Matters

School Do PI Panelists Read Your WAT? Implication
IIM-A Usually NO (AWT scored separately) Focus on AWT quality; PI is independent
IIM-B Sometimes YES (if time permits) Be prepared to elaborate on WAT points
IIM-C Often YES (may ask follow-up questions) Don’t write positions you can’t defend verbally
XLRI Almost ALWAYS (values consistency) WAT and PI MUST align—vocabulary, stance, depth
SPJIMR YES (integrated evaluation) Holistic assessment across all components
⚠️ Panelist Quote

“If someone wrote brilliantly about ethical leadership but can’t discuss it in PI, that’s a red flag.” — IIM Panelist Interview, 2024-25

Vocabulary Calibration Across Stages

Vocabulary in WAT

Characteristics: Formal, structured, precise. Full sentences. Complete arguments.

Vocabulary level: Slightly elevated but natural. Academic transitions. Policy-appropriate language.

Example: “While digital payments have revolutionized financial inclusion—with UPI processing 10 billion transactions monthly—the digital divide persists, leaving rural populations vulnerable to exclusion.”

Goal: Demonstrate depth, clarity, and structured thinking through writing.

Vocabulary in GD/Group Exercise

Characteristics: Conversational but confident. Shorter phrases. Quick transitions.

Vocabulary level: Accessible but informed. Building on others. Quick pivots.

Example: “Building on Rahul’s point about digital adoption—the data shows 10 billion UPI transactions, but we must ask: who’s still excluded?”

Goal: Same ideas as WAT, but delivered for conversation, not documentation.

Vocabulary in PI

Characteristics: Authentic, thoughtful, personal. Complete sentences but conversational tone.

Vocabulary level: Natural but articulate. Should sound like you, not a performance.

Example: “In my WAT, I wrote about digital inclusion. What struck me personally was my grandmother—she still counts cash while my brother trades crypto before breakfast.”

Goal: Show the person behind the essay. Consistent ideas, authentic delivery.

The Consistency Test: Same Core, Different Delivery

Your core arguments should remain constant; only the delivery changes. Here’s how the same point adapts across stages:

Stage Same Point on “AI in Hiring”
WAT “The fundamental challenge lies in accountability. When an algorithm rejects a candidate, the accountability vacuum—spanning developer, deployer, and vendor—becomes ethically untenable.”
GD “The real question is accountability. When AI rejects someone, who’s responsible? The developer? The company? That’s the gap we need to address.”
PI “What concerns me most about AI hiring is accountability. I wrote about this in my WAT—when an algorithm says no, there’s no one to question. As someone who’s been through job applications, that opacity feels fundamentally unfair.”
Coach’s Perspective
Here’s the authenticity paradox I see every year: students memorize “impressive” vocabulary for WAT, then sound like a completely different person in PI. Panelists notice. The solution isn’t to dumb down your WAT—it’s to elevate your natural speaking vocabulary so there’s no jarring gap. If you write “the exigencies of contemporary governance necessitate” but speak “the government should, like, do something,” you’ve exposed your WAT as performance. Your written and spoken vocabulary should be cousins, not strangers.

WAT Based GD: Converting Written Skills to Verbal

Some schools (increasingly rare) conduct GDs based on or related to WAT topics. More commonly, the same frameworks that generate WAT content also generate GD points. The vocabulary connection is crucial: what you write becomes what you speak.

The Framework Connection: WAT and GD Use Same Content

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Same Frameworks, Different Execution
PESTLE, stakeholder analysis, pros-cons—these frameworks work for both WAT and GD.

WAT: Sustained argument across 250 words
GD: Points/entries of 15-30 seconds each
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Vocabulary Compression
WAT sentence: “The gig economy, while offering flexibility to 7.7 million workers, leaves fewer than 5% with social security coverage—a disparity that demands policy intervention.”

GD version: “7.7 million gig workers, less than 5% with social security. That’s the gap we’re discussing.”

Converting WAT Vocabulary for GD Use

WAT Phrase GD Adaptation Why It Works
“Furthermore, the evidence suggests…” “Adding to that point…” Natural, conversational, builds on others
“Critics might argue that…” “Playing devil’s advocate here…” Shows critical thinking in real-time
“To synthesize these perspectives…” “If I can summarize what we’ve discussed…” Positions you as synthesizer—evaluators notice
“The data from [source] demonstrates…” “The numbers are striking—[stat]…” Same data, conversational delivery
“This raises a fundamental question about…” “Here’s what I think we’re really asking…” Elevates discussion, shows depth

GD Survival Vocabulary: When You Have Zero Content

Even if you know nothing about a GD topic, frameworks + vocabulary can generate points:

💡 Framework-Generated Entry Phrases

PESTLE entry: “Let’s consider the economic dimension—who benefits and who bears the cost?”

Stakeholder entry: “We haven’t discussed the impact on [employees/consumers/communities]…”

Synthesis entry: “I notice we’re debating X vs Y, but perhaps the real question is Z…”

Reframe entry: “Building on Priya’s point, if we look at this from a long-term perspective…”

Data request: “Does anyone have data on the scale of this? Numbers would help ground our discussion.”

These phrases work even with minimal content knowledge because they demonstrate structured thinking.

The Two GD Nightmares: Vocabulary Solutions

✅ Fish Market: Imposing Structure
  • “Can we pause and structure this discussion?”
  • “I think we’re conflating two separate issues…”
  • “Let me try to bring this back to the core question…”
  • “We’ve covered X and Y—what about Z?”
  • Even if ignored, attempting structure gets noticed by evaluators
✅ Zero Knowledge: Synthesizer Mode
  • “What I’m hearing from both sides is…”
  • “Rahul raised an interesting point about X that connects to Priya’s concern about Y…”
  • “The trade-off seems to be between A and B…”
  • “If I can summarize where we’ve landed…”
  • Active listening + reframing = contribution without deep content

Statistics in WAT: Data Language That Impresses

Essays with specific data, facts, and years score 38% higher on average. But how you introduce statistics matters as much as the statistics themselves. Here’s the vocabulary that makes data sing.

The Statistics Introduction Formula

Never drop a statistic naked. Always wrap it in context and significance.

💡 Statistics Introduction Templates

Template 1 – Scale revelation:
“[Specific number]. This striking figure reveals [interpretation].”
Example: “7.7 million workers. This striking figure reveals the true scale of India’s gig economy—and the social security gap that accompanies it.”

Template 2 – Comparison hook:
“While [expected belief], [surprising data] tells a different story.”
Example: “While space missions seem astronomically expensive, Chandrayaan-3’s ₹615 crore budget—less than Hollywood’s Avatar-2—tells a different story about Indian innovation.”

Template 3 – Change over time:
“From [X] to [Y] in just [timeframe]—this trajectory [interpretation].”
Example: “From 45% to 62% abstract topics in just three years—this trajectory confirms that IIMs increasingly test thinking, not news awareness.”

Template 4 – Reality check:
“[Popular claim]. Yet [data] suggests otherwise.”
Example: “Startups are India’s growth story. Yet with 92% failing within five years, the 110 unicorns mask a harsher reality.”

High-Value Statistics for WAT: Ready to Deploy

Topic Area Statistic How to Introduce It
Digital India UPI: 10+ billion transactions/month (2024) “Ten billion monthly transactions—UPI has transformed how India pays.”
Economy India: 5th largest economy, $3.7 trillion GDP “At $3.7 trillion, India’s economy ranks fifth globally—yet per capita tells a different story.”
Gig Economy 7.7 million workers, <5% social security “7.7 million gig workers, fewer than 5% with social security—this is the flexibility-security trade-off.”
Innovation Chandrayaan-3: ₹615 Cr (less than Hollywood films) “At ₹615 crore—less than one Hollywood blockbuster—Chandrayaan-3 proved frugal innovation works.”
AI Adoption ChatGPT: 100 million users in 2 months “100 million users in 60 days—no technology has been adopted faster than generative AI.”
Environment Delhi AQI exceeded 400 for 11 consecutive days (Nov 2024) “Eleven consecutive days above AQI 400—Delhi’s air crisis isn’t seasonal anymore; it’s structural.”
Startups 110 unicorns, but 92% failure rate in 5 years “110 unicorns headline the story; the 92% failure rate within five years is the footnote we ignore.”
Digital Payments 72% of all transactions now digital “72% of transactions are now digital—India has leapfrogged the credit card era entirely.”

Statistics Vocabulary: Words That Add Authority

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Size & Scale Words
Use: staggering, substantial, unprecedented, modest, marginal, negligible

“A staggering 72% of transactions are now digital.”
“Despite substantial investment, returns remain marginal.”
2
Change & Trend Words
Use: surge, plummet, plateau, accelerate, decline, stabilize

“Deepfake complaints have surged 400% in 2024.”
“After initial growth, user engagement has plateaued.”
3
Comparison Words
Use: outpace, dwarf, eclipse, match, lag behind, trail

“UPI adoption has eclipsed all predecessors.”
“India’s per capita income still lags behind the global average.”
4
Certainty Qualifiers
Use: evidence suggests, data indicates, research demonstrates, analysis reveals

“Evidence suggests that…” (when confident)
“Early data indicates that…” (when emerging)
⚠️ Never Fabricate Statistics

“I Google suspicious numbers. Fabrication = automatic fail.” — IIM Evaluator

If you’re unsure of exact numbers, use qualifiers: “Research suggests that a significant majority…” or “Studies indicate that nearly…” A vague accurate statement beats a precise fabrication.

Storytelling WAT: Narrative Vocabulary That Engages

“One personal story beats ten statistics.” — IIM Faculty. Essays with personal stories in the first 50 words score 5.2× higher. But storytelling in WAT requires specific vocabulary that creates vivid, memorable moments without wasting words.

The Personal Story Opening: Vocabulary Framework

A strong personal opening has three elements: specific detail + tension/contrast + bridge to topic.

Successful WAT Opening – With Vocabulary Analysis

“My father runs a kirana store in Gorakhpur. Last Diwali, a customer asked if he accepts Paytm. He smiled—because he’d been accepting it for two years. Rural India isn’t waiting for digital transformation; it’s already there.

Specific detail (father, kirana store, Gorakhpur) → Tension (question/smile) → Bridge (rural India, digital transformation). This opening converted at IIM-A.

Storytelling Vocabulary: Words That Create Scenes

Purpose Generic (Forgettable) Vivid (Memorable)
Setting a scene “In my workplace…” “On the factory floor at 6 AM…”
Introducing tension “There was a problem…” “The deadline was 48 hours away when we discovered…”
Showing contrast “Things changed…” “Six months ago, I lost my job to AI. Today, I train that same tool.”
Personal observation “I noticed…” “My grandmother still counts cash for vegetables while my brother trades crypto before breakfast.”
Resolution/insight “I learned…” “That moment crystallized something…”

Story Types That Work in WAT

Personal Experience Story

Best for: Topics on technology, change, personal values, workplace

Vocabulary signals: “When I…”, “My first…”, “I remember…”, “The moment I realized…”

Example: “When I joined my first job, my manager’s feedback was brutal: ‘Your ideas are good; your communication is not.’ That one sentence launched three years of deliberate practice.”

Bridge to topic: “This personal journey illuminates why communication skills remain irreplaceable in an AI age.”

Observed Reality Story

Best for: Social issues, policy, inequality, rural-urban divide

Vocabulary signals: “In my hometown…”, “I witnessed…”, “What struck me was…”, “The contrast is visible…”

Example: “In my village in Bihar, the government school has a computer lab. The computers have been ‘arriving next month’ for three years. Meanwhile, every teenager has a smartphone.”

Bridge to topic: “This gap between official infrastructure and ground reality defines India’s digital story.”

Contrast Story

Best for: Change, generational shifts, before/after, transformation

Vocabulary signals: “Then vs now…”, “My grandmother… my brother…”, “A decade ago… today…”, “While X…, Y…”

Example: “My grandmother still distrusts banks; she hides cash in sarees. My sister, 15, has never touched physical currency. Three generations, three financial realities, one household.”

Bridge to topic: “India’s financial inclusion must bridge all three.”

Business Case Story

Best for: Strategy, ethics, leadership, management topics

Vocabulary signals: “When [company] faced…”, “The decision to…”, “What [leader] did next…”, “The turning point came when…”

Example: “When Tata Steel faced the 2008 financial crisis, Ratan Tata didn’t cut jobs. He cut his own salary. That single decision defined trust-based leadership.”

Bridge to topic: “In an era of ‘move fast and break things,’ such principled leadership feels both radical and necessary.”

Coach’s Perspective
Most students think storytelling means long narratives. Wrong. In a 250-word WAT, you have 50 words maximum for story—20% of your essay. The skill is compression: one vivid detail, one moment of tension, one bridge to your argument. “My father runs a kirana store in Gorakhpur” accomplishes more than three paragraphs of background. Specificity is the vocabulary of storytelling. Not “my family business” but “kirana store.” Not “my city” but “Gorakhpur.” Every specific word earns its place.

WAT Mistakes: Vocabulary Errors That Kill Scores

20% of candidates are rejected for generic essays. 18% for ignoring the prompt. 16% for lack of clarity. Many of these failures are vocabulary failures—using the wrong words, overused phrases, or language that signals lazy thinking.

The Vocabulary Hall of Shame

Phrases Evaluators Hate – Ranked by Frequency

1. Dictionary Openings (Instant eye-roll)

“According to the Oxford Dictionary, corruption is defined as…”

“We reject essays that start with dictionary definitions of ‘corruption’, ‘women empowerment’, or ‘digital India’.” — IIM-B AdCom

2. “In my opinion” (Appears in 87% of essays)

“In my opinion, I personally feel that technology is important…”

Everything you write is your opinion. Stop announcing it. Show opinion through argument.

3. Overused Openings

“In today’s fast-paced world…” “From time immemorial…” “As we all know…”

“In today’s fast-paced world” appears in 90% of WAT essays. It’s invisible to evaluators.

4. Fence-Sitting Conclusions

“Only time will tell…” “There are pros and cons to both sides…” “It depends on the situation…”

“Analysis without opinion is Wikipedia, not an essay.” — IIM Evaluator

5. Empty Intensifiers

“Very important,” “really significant,” “extremely crucial,” “absolutely essential”

These add nothing. “Important” or “crucial” alone is stronger.

Common Vocabulary Mistakes: Do’s and Don’ts

✅ Do This
  • Start with a specific detail, not a definition
  • Show opinion through argument, not “I think”
  • Use active voice (“The company implemented…”)
  • End with action verbs (“must,” “should,” “can”)
  • Use words you can spell and define
  • Keep sentences under 20 words average
  • Use specific numbers when you have them
❌ Don’t Do This
  • Open with “According to Oxford Dictionary…”
  • Overuse “In my opinion” or “I personally feel”
  • Use passive voice (“Implementation was done…”)
  • End with “Only time will tell”
  • Use thesaurus words you’ve never used before
  • Write 50-word sentences
  • Fabricate statistics

Vocabulary Mistakes by Profile

Profile Common Vocabulary Mistake Solution
Engineers Writing reads “dry”—sounds like project report. Bullet-point thinking. Panic on abstract topics. Add human impact to every data point. Practice metaphors and analogies. Memorize 10-15 quotes from non-tech thinkers.
Non-Engineers Essays sound too “literary.” Lack structure. Missing data-driven vocabulary. Use rigid structure templates. Memorize 20-25 key statistics. Learn business framing vocabulary.
Freshers Overuse college project examples. Sound theoretical, not practical. Use current affairs as examples. Frame academic experiences professionally. Observer perspective for business topics.
Non-Native English Trying to sound impressive with unfamiliar words. Complex sentence structures that break. Build 100 Golden Sentences bank. Target 95% active voice. Keep sentences to 7-8 words average.

The Grammar Mistakes That Cost Marks

⚠️ Evaluator Quote

“If you don’t know the difference between ‘their’ and ‘there,’ I will assume you don’t know the difference between an asset and a liability.” — Corporate Recruiter (widely cited by IIM panelists)

Error Type Wrong Correct
Subject-verb agreement “The data shows…” (data is plural) “The data show…” or “This data shows…”
Their/There/They’re “Companies must protect there interests” “Companies must protect their interests”
Affect/Effect “The policy will effect growth” “The policy will affect growth” / “The effect on growth”
Its/It’s “India must realize it’s potential” “India must realize its potential”
Tense consistency “The company launches… and increased sales” “The company launched… and increased sales”
Coach’s Perspective
The most expensive vocabulary mistake I see? Students using words they don’t own. They write “paradigmatic shift in the societal zeitgeist” and then in PI say “things have changed a lot.” The inconsistency is jarring. The solution: read your WAT aloud. If you wouldn’t say it in conversation, don’t write it. Your written vocabulary should be your spoken vocabulary’s slightly more formal cousin—not a stranger wearing a borrowed suit.
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Key Takeaways
  • 1
    Simple Beats Complex
    Clear, precise language consistently scores higher than impressive vocabulary. 16% of rejections are for lack of clarity. Complexity of thought, simplicity of expression.
  • 2
    Verbs Over Adjectives
    The Verb Test: If there’s no action verb, there’s no action. “Schools must integrate” beats “Education is important.” Conclusions need verbs: implement, mandate, reform, transform.
  • 3
    Statistics Need Introduction
    Never drop statistics naked. Use templates: “[Number]. This striking figure reveals [interpretation].” Essays with specific data score +38% higher.
  • 4
    Personal Stories Win
    Essays with personal stories in first 50 words score 5.2× higher. One specific detail (“kirana store in Gorakhpur”) beats three paragraphs of background.
  • 5
    Avoid the Hall of Shame
    Dictionary openings, “In my opinion,” “In today’s fast-paced world,” and “Only time will tell” appear in majority of essays. Evaluators are tired of them.
  • 6
    Consistency Across WAT-GD-PI
    Your vocabulary must remain consistent across all stages. Schools cross-reference. If your WAT sounds sophisticated but PI sounds basic, the gap is noticed. Write like you speak, just slightly more formal.
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Frequently Asked Questions

Wrong question. You don’t need new words—you need better deployment of words you already know. Focus on: 20 powerful transitions, 10 argument phrases, 10 statistics introduction templates, and 10 conclusion action verbs. That’s 50 patterns total, not new vocabulary. If you can use these 50 patterns precisely and naturally, your vocabulary will seem sophisticated—even though you’re using words you already knew. Quality of deployment beats quantity of words.

No. Research consistently shows simple, clear language scores higher than complex vocabulary. Evaluators spend 30 seconds on your essay—they want to understand your thinking, not decode your thesaurus use. As one IIM-A professor noted: “Effective communication gets to the point quickly. Unnecessary complexity suggests unclear thinking.” Use precise words (not vague ones), but don’t use complex words (to sound impressive). The difference matters.

The 100 Golden Sentences method works best for non-native speakers. Build a personal bank of 100 well-constructed sentences organized by purpose. Practice adapting these patterns to different topics. Key targets: 95% active voice, Flesch readability score above 55, average sentence length of 7-8 words. Remember: “Simple and clear beats complex and confusing.” One successful IIM-L convert said: “English is my third language. My first essay had 47 errors. My final draft had 2. The panel noticed the growth, not the origin.”

Maximum 1-2 quotes per essay. Quotes should support your argument, not replace it. One failure case study shows a candidate who scored 3/10 after using 5 quotes—the evaluator commented: “This isn’t a quote compilation. Where is YOUR opinion?” Good quote use: “As Ratan Tata noted, ‘If your writing is unclear, your thinking is unclear’—a principle that applies equally to policy communication.” The quote adds authority; your analysis does the work. Memorize 10-15 quotes from diverse thinkers (not just business leaders), but use sparingly.

Revert to simple, clear language—it’s better than frozen silence or forced complexity. Emergency fallback templates: Start with “This topic asks us to consider…” Use basic transitions (“However,” “Furthermore,” “Therefore”). End with action: “The way forward requires [specific action].” A complete essay in simple language beats an incomplete essay attempting sophistication. Top scorers average 16 minutes 40 seconds for 20-minute WATs—they leave buffer time. If vocabulary fails you, clarity won’t.

Read your WAT essays aloud. If you wouldn’t say a phrase in conversation, reconsider using it in writing. Practice mock PIs where you’re asked to elaborate on your WAT positions—can you explain your written ideas verbally without sounding like a different person? The goal is that your written vocabulary is your spoken vocabulary’s slightly more formal cousin—recognizably related. Schools cross-reference WAT with PI; inconsistency is a red flag. At XLRI especially, panelists almost always read your WAT before interviewing you.

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